Observations of an Invisible Woman

The Story of Us

Carbon explodes and I am born

The universe my blood

The soil my family

The trees my hair

The sun my ancestors

I am everywhere

In everything

I am you

You are me

The Earth my playground

Made just for me

This is the story of you and me

This is the story of us

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12 thoughts on “The Story of Us

  1. Sanctified Brother on said:


  2. Thank you.

    I wrote it last night staring up into the night sky.

  3. Sanctified Brother on said:

    Some of the best times, places, and ways to write.

  4. Kushite Prince on said:

    Very beautiful! ūüôā

  5. Thank You…Since I channeled my ancestors, I’m feeling a bit “different”. LOL! I don’t know exactly how to explain but I just feel more connected to them.

  6. Beautiful from the opening line. Might I worry now that you danced into my territory?

    Seriously, it was very well written and straight forward. I can almost feel where you were in your head. Not to many words, just right.

    I say you and me writer something together, when you have the time of course.

  7. Kushite Prince on said:

    That’s good to hear. You’re re really connecting with them. You have a warrior spirit about you that’s why. That means you’re on the right path.

  8. mary burrell on said:

    You sure you and hunglikejesus are not the same person. tee heee!

  9. LOL we are the same person just don’t tell nobody.

  10. ynotme on said:

    Beautiful poem…you are so very gifted!

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  12. nicoleizhername on said:

    Life-Affirming. Thank U

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